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Wednesday, 15 February 2012

55 fiction : Alone at Hostel







The dog howled waking Della up at midnight. Alone she was in her hostel room. All left home for Diwali that day. 
She suddenly remembered the story about the girl who committed suicide in the next room. To her horror,she could hear her ghost moving in the hallway.
Hallway: the thief tiptoed silently with the TV.



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This is my attempt on the popular "55 fiction" . Well, the rule say you have to create a fictional story having suspense in just 55 words or less. But not more than that. Try it ! :D and BTW scary photo no? :P

14 comments:

  1. SCARY PIC AND I READ THESE IN DARK, no current :P
    HAHA good one and i counted the words as well :)
    You rock :)

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    1. lmao. haha.. i wanted the pic to set the mood. so glad it worked! and i learnt about 55fiction from you. So.. you rock! :D

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  2. pic is scary...

    http://sushmita-smile.blogspot.in/

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  3. Hostel - those boring boring boring days when everybody went home for 5-day vacation while we pidrep-pidrap-pudrup inside the silent building. Kick the ghost and the thief in their butts!!!

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    1. haha.. Yeah.. And especially when we don't have anywhere to go.. sucks like hell!! I would have seriously kick any thief's butt with pleasure :P

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  4. So this is what they call a 55er. My turn comes next. Yeah you rock \m/

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    1. i will be waiting for your 55 fiction! \m/

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  5. I thought..u will write to be continued...nice one.

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    1. lolz.. thanks! a lot of "to be continued" might come in the future though

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  6. 55 fictions have always been an enjoyable read and I must say I loved the way you weaved the suspense in such short span. Wish you good luck with writing.

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    1. Thanks Abhra Pal for stopping by.. and thanks for the wish :D

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